Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Let me start thinking how I will make this into a good song. No copyright on a title.

Dropping onto my songs and trolling and demeaning my writing again? Nonetheless, I'm curious to see what you can do.

They say "write what you know." In a previous post, I recall you stating that you had only been involved in 2 romances in your entire life. If so, that is not going to be a very big data base, or difficult to understand. Nonetheless, show us what you got.

No I've been in dozens of romances, I've only been in love once or twice .

Yes write what you know, as long as you can write like you are really in there, it works

Having the real experience helps. I don't think this is a about love anyway, it's about heartbreak.

But it's still gotta be artistic or poetic, not written boring. Somebody has to hear it, give them a reason to listen on.

Good opening lines, help the listener see what's going on, as opposed to just saying it.

Reward the listener with a good hook, and in country a payoff

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 05/22/25 09:54 AM.