Hi Marty,

I agree with Rob. I think the bottom half of the chorus could either be scrapped or better, used as the bridge, or a second bridge? You and I and Rob have the advantage of importing stems into our DAWs and changing stuff around. So just my two-cents.

But a really good song that's got a uniting vibe, a 'come-together-for-a-common-cause' vibe, not a divisive one, and I like that. smile

Mike

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 04/19/25 03:47 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)