Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
But it means your not a songwriter.
You continue to berate my work, when it's clearly superior to this shite
Perhaps you don't know the difference, hence stick to what you know

Dom,
You continue to hurl empty insults at me.
All they are is insults and nothing more.

I critiqued your song and laid out the basis for my critiques.
Unlike yourself, I didn't just tard out..."your song sucks."
I told you why I think that your song is essentially impotent by any measurement.

Nonetheless, I was delightfully surprised that you bumped TAKE A PASS.
Anyone observing can look at your remarks (insults) and make up their own mind about my song...if they decide to bother.

xoxo
Marty

https://soundcloud.com/sunset-poet-of-texas