Originally Posted by Rob B.
In my opinion, the only good thing about this song/demo is the chorus. It sounds great. Really catchy. Congrats. But the rest … sorry … just doesn’t work. The intro is a bit too long. The music sounds outdated. In line 3 of both verses the singer has problems fitting all the words in. Those lines don’t flow well with the music. The demo covers only a small part of the song. The rhyme scheme in the bridge is not consistent. In the first 4 lines you have a A-B-A-B scheme which is good. In the second 4 lines it’s an A-B-C-B scheme which doesn’t really work well.

I’ve been playing around with these AI song generators too. They are nice. They give you ideas. But in the end, they take creativity away from you. They compose tunes, record instruments, define a vocal melody, they sing for you, they even write lines that might be missing. When done, you have to you ask yourself, how much of that song came from you? I find it astonishing how you identify yourself with the results. But ok, if you’re a pure lyricist this software turns your poems into songs. I prefer to collaborate with talented writers, musicians, producers.

Btw, getting a lot of views doesn’t mean you have a hit or a good song. I was one of them and your song didn’t hit me straight in the face. You noticed yourself that hardly anybody comments your song. I am one of the few to give you some feedback.

Well I think it's a really good start and snap shot.

Your song is ten times weaker id be working on that instead of looking for vengeance