Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Yes, easily. Obviously you'd need probably two more sections.

I agree with Japovs, melody supercedes everything, but many people write track first. Depends what your genre is, and I think once I finish my singer songwriter stuff I'm going to try writing this way

Great start, I like how it builds on the initial theme.

Reminds a bit of 80's stuff like Steve Winwood, higher love or something, broken wings, Mr Mr

Long way to go for that, but its a start

And yes, nice to have pro studio in your hands

Enjoyed, worth working on, maybe offer it up as a challenge, let people here write a melody and lyric to it

I'm pretty confident I could knock this out of the park
Dom,
Are you able to record VOX?
Perhaps the three of us could whip something together here wink

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