I'm just glad to see you post something lol.

""what the hell does Foray mean, i looked it up, and its alike a sudden attack on an enemy, or an uprising. I am using it more as a vindication, and kind of explaining to any or all what i have been up against. And how im gonna be ok""

Well... I think if you're going to use "foray" this way;
1- There should be more explanation why
2- Describe yourself as a one man army against...?

Currently, you just seem like a victim of your own decisions.
But, yes... the rhythm here is obvious, very "rap" worthy smile

Last edited by JAPOV; 09/01/23 02:35 PM.