Marty,
I'm very grateful for every piece of feedback that I get from others. The thing with this song and a few of my others is, they are collab songs. I created the music around someone's lyrics. When I do that, I try to leave the lyrics the way they were originally written. Of course, when I have major issues we jointly discuss them and together we find solutions. When I post one of these collab songs here and get comments regarding the lyrics, well ... I'm the wrong address. I try to avoid discussing things I'm not responsible for. In this case I know Carroll is following this thread. If he chooses not to participate, that's his decision and i respect that. All I can say is that I fell in love with these lines and my wife confirms that they are spot on. Since the lyrics are generated with AI I can easily change lines, if Carroll finds something better. I don't need to make any new recordings.

It's interesting that so many people here don't like his lyrics. The funny thing is, he's finding loads of top-notch musicians, songwriters and producers who create beautiful songs around his lyrics. That shows me, he's pretty good at it.

Again, thank you for the feedback and the open discussion.

All the best - Robert