Hi,

I'm looking for feedback on this song before I start pitching to Artists. I wrote the lyrics and Rayna wrote the melody. I'm going to target Southern Gospel and Inspirational Country groups.

"When I Pray"
Listen to "When I Pray" (Ft Rayna) by Darin Martin on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/WBQcF

When I Pray
Words and music (c) 2023
Darin Martin & Rayna Carlock

(V1)
When I'm lost, when I'm feeling down
I know I need a little help to get me through the day
I talk to God so He can turn my life around
I just feel better when I pray

(Chorus)
When I pray God listens to what I have to say
I can see God work in mysterious ways
When I bow my head the devil runs away
I just feel better when I pray

(V2)
When I'm sad, when I've got the blues
He knows what’s on my heart when I don’t know what to say
When I doubt God knows what I'm going through
I just feel better when I pray

(Repeat Chorus)

(Bridge)
I put my trust in Jesus now He’s my dearest friend
If you believe it, can I get an amen?

(Repeat Chorus)

Last edited by dtrainddog; 05/21/23 07:25 PM.

My music.
Check out Darin Martin on #SoundCloud
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