I think with some power chording on guitar and other interesting bits it wouldnt sound so abrubt. Its also nice to a curve ball in there, if the ear expects it...maybe im being too predictable.

I like some of this, the melody is good and the lyrics are pretty good. The stuff im working on now kicks this ones arse....

lol, dude your funny, mastering? Its two instruments, its a demo, scratch demo, Why master it if theres no bass, guitar, backing vocals

If i used anything it might have just been the generic pre dump gadgets in my daw