HI Gavin,
You did what you aimed for, turned it into a fun, catchy, song. I read the lyrics through most of the video but I did catch that evil clown, and loved the dancing scene and the sax at the end was great. Thanks for sharing.


Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
A day without learning is a day lost forever.

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