From the lyric, I thought he was on deathrow. "The long walk down the corridor".

Unless, he's in a daycare center, substitute "prison" for "deathrow" and do something different with the bridge. Deathrow makes for a better song. There's no arc, otherwise, no act three.


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love