I enjoyed it, Kevin. I particularly like right at the end when the synths and brass sounds came in (if that's what they were). It seemed to lift it to another level. To me the vocals sounded a little bit thin and lacking presence. Could be just a case of bringing them a little forward in the mix or adding a little more reverb. Or it could just be me smile Also, at 5 minutes, it's a little long.
Nice work!