I agree with everyone about the great vocals and the cinematic feel. Great job! I expected it to lift even more about 1:47 into a sustained note introducing a big emotional chorus, breaking free from the controlled character of the rest of the song, which would make what I take to be the chorus...
"In the night...She's in every dream
Lovers...But nothings ever as it seems
It's a running theme, when she leaves..."

...into a pre-chorus. That is probably just me. When I really like things, I can't help making suggestions. smile

I love the lush feel to the arrangements. Very old style in a good way. Made me think of Charles Aznavour for some reason.