Hi JAPOV,
Thanks for the visit and the kind words. This one was written with a specific person in mind and this is the very first thought that ran through my mind to tell her. Yes, it is a cliche, but there is a reason for cliches, most of them make sense. I actually wrote a "Cliche" song and posted it here a while ago,"Tell Her How Ya Feel" . It sounds like you have the start of a good hook/song there.