Thanks for reading.
Just a dash-off Lyric, written without benefit of guitar in hand to inform the Lyric of Rhythmic nuances to obey in the Prosody that makes the marriage of Lyric and Melody work.
In Verse I I do manage to get a Singer-Character telling his story, First-Person.
He gets quickly to the Chorus where he addresses himself to a Love-Interest Character.
So it does have some merit potential for a Song.

Last edited by Gary E. Andrews; 11/28/19 06:56 AM.

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