Like the tune, smoking track...Not gonna tell you what''s right, because there is a ton which is rockin'....But I have 2 things that STICK OUT that I would suggest

You are doing the TITLE an Injustice with no Harmony on your TITLE. Your voice get's drowned out and the TITLE is barely audible...

You need that High harmony ONE WORD...This should give your HOOK sparkle & sizzle....Oh and you need a female harmony...Preferably a sista'....Or at least that or a Christina Aguilera type sound. A BIG VOICE. This will give your CHORUS an anthem-like sound....

Also, changing the 2nd CHORUS to "It's the Word" versus "ONE WORD" & it's continuity and repetiotion is a slight misfire IMO...Keep your CHORUS the same. It get's confusing to listeners and when the CHORUS rolls around you want them yelling "ONE WORD"...This way they can't wait till you come back to the part where they can sing "ONE WORD"....

At least this is what I hear.....

Steve Altonian---"I'll just do my best & let God do the rest"

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