Originally Posted by Martin Lide
"There she was" had two intentions. Primarily, V1 describes a young man going about some fairly regular activities that commence a Saturday. Then the tonal mood changes and the singer says "There she was." Which is really a question for a listener...There who was?
Drama, suspense and all that.

Also, in a long Story song with more than 2 verses, "there she was" was a a turn from the end of one verse back into the beginning of the next. And relieves a bit of the monotony.

So..."there she was." wink


Let me add that most of your stuff has real "soul" to it, and I dont mean James Brown Soul. It always sounds like you're in there. And it sounds authentic, Cant learn that, alot of people have zero soul.

But you can learn to take bits and pieces and put them together. Study pop songs.

Enjoyed listening.

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 04/05/19 04:25 PM.