Ricki & Mike...

Exceptional lyric.

I like what your have done with this, Ricki. The repeats at the end of line 3 is a nice touch. The use of background- style vocals for the "In my lonely room" lines in the chorus works really well.

A nice guitar/vocal recording. Add a simple bass guitar line and a snare with brushes and it would be complete.

Cool song.

fj