I felt something when I listened to this song because a woman I know just lost her husband outside Cleveland.

As for suggestions, I understand you don't want to change anything and I haven't read the other comments, but for what it's worth.....

The second line of V2 needs a trim. "I won't remember him every day"?

But in my head, the last line of each verse needs to resolve to the 1 chord. The tension set up never gets resolved and leaves me hanging. I might even suggest adding another line to each verse, repeating the hook and resolving to the root chord at the end.

I know this requires a major revision and I won't be offended if you don't want to mess with it!

Colin

I try to critique as if you mean business.....

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