Gavin, this made me laugh, mainly because of how disjointed it is. I can visualize this couple: she's on the verge of leaving him and his response is divided between heartbreak and totally inappropriate. Should he laugh or cry? Sounds like he's doing both and sometimes that can feel pretty reasonable. The only line that really did seem out of place is the one about the boy who drowned...but I suppose in his desperation, he's just saying whatever is in his head? Anyway, I found it very entertaining and unique and enjoyed my listen.

Ricki