This is timeless beauty, David. The meter and scenery gives it a Wordsworthian kind of feel. Well done!

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 04/07/15 06:36 AM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)