Thanks Trush for responding.I think whats snaggin ya up is the quirky way I got the verse.Tell ya what,lemme try this.I'll put you the chord progression I hear on one of the verses and chorus.It's moderat tempo,kinda sorta bout the tempo of "Not Counting You"(a Garth song) and see if that conveys the rhyme scheme better.TY VM for your critique,its helping already~!~!~!


VERSE
C
Tho today won't be like yesterday,
G
It's gonna hurt the same.
As it did the day you said goodbye,
C
And left me here to blame.
C7
Seems everyday, that's passed my way,
F
Since you left ain't been right.
D
Oh how I'm blue,it's sad but true.
G G7
I'm lost without your light.

CHORUS
C G
Without you,I just don't feel the sunshine,
C
Without you,All my skies are grey.
C7
Without you to shine your loving light,
F Fm
I'm lost in darkness day and night.
C G
Without you,I'm a mess in every way.

I hope this makes sense and helps people to see the idea of the melody behind this TY all VVVVMuch~!~!~!




[This message has been edited by EARLVIS_PITTSLEY (edited 03-31-2004).]