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EARLVIS_PITTSLEY, I THINK YOU HAVE ONE GREAT TUNE HERE. WORDS FLOWED LIKE A GOOD COLD BEER DOWN A DRY THROAT.
Just a nit here and there from an unpublished, barely known, rarely heard, singer-songwriter, who doesn't even know the melody you're referring to, kinda guy.
I think you should end the 1st verse "I'm lost without you"
The chorus starts out strong but ends up so-so.
Verse 2 and 3 should be combined.
So pluck or muck, I really like it so far.
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