A nice heartfelt story. Good production and performance.

The lyrical structure is unusual as you mentioned but it works with the music you have written. I think this is a good example of why you need to write the whole song yourself or with your musical partners because if you had sent these lyrics to a demo studio, you would never have got a result anything like this.

Colin

I try to critique as if you mean business.....

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