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Hi Brian,
I really like this one, though the structures a bit confusing. You do the last line/hook refrain on verses 2, 4, and 6. Then basically repeat the 2nd and 6th verses much like a chorus with the exception of "Later on" and "At that time".
I really like the read and hook as well. I'm not quite sure how the structure would effect any commercial aspirations, but thought it was worth a mention. Good write!
David
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