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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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PETE
by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Hi Jackie,
I think this is the first one of your lyrics I've read. First thought when I saw the title? Elvis Presley did a song with this exact title on his 1956 debut album. Your song is much different, and if it was anyone other than Elvis, I would probably say the title doesn't matter. I hate to say that may not be the case. I do like what you've got here, and can't help but wonder if you could change the title/hook a bit. Nice writing!
David
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