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Here's a tune I've had off and on Jpfolks. With help from Kimberlyinnc and Wendy D. I think it finally came alive. Added a chorus, dropped some verse...basically just used the story and had a total rewrite with Kim. Hope you like it. THANK YOU LADIES! http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10074035Goodbye V1 It seems I'm falling out of love, As fast as I fell in, I wake from disappointing dreams, Lyin' next to him. I know he's tried but I've changed, And I don't understand, How I could want to leave, A good hardworking man. PRE-CH But I'm barely hangin' on to this life of lies, And I'm barely holdin' back the word goodbye. CH Goodbye's the word that carries the most weight, Sometimes the finish line gets blurred, It's so damn hard to say. While one gains their freedom, The other wants to die, Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye. V2 I feel her stirring next to me, In her Hendrix shirt, She's the most beautiful, Girl on God's green Earth. But lately she's been acting strange, No passion in her touch, I want to bring her back, But I am not enough. PRE-CH (repeat) CH (repeat) OUTTRO Yeah, we're barely hangin' on to our life of lies, And she's barely holding back the word goodbye, While she gains her freedom I just wanna die, Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye.
I have music for all of my songs and they vary from rock to country to folk and everywhere in between. (except rap)
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