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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Soft Loft
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 11:52 AM
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8Graves
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 06:05 PM
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Saosin
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 02:43 PM
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this is an old song i wrote last year .
~ --- slow intro --- ~
~ --- humming melody --- ~
time cant stand still only for you .
you cant live life inside you're dream fantasy land .
take my hand, we're leaving here tonight .
come with me, ill keep you safe, hold you tight .
i'll not let you fall, dont be afriad to stay with me .
( chours )
for you i'd fall, fall in the deep blue sea,
for you i'd crawl over the hottest of fire.
i wont let you get away, i'll do anything to keep you, keep you here with me .
lets take on the world, and ask of it our bidding .
lets make our own life together, where no one knows who we are there .
i'll hold you close, when you're scared .
i just hope you'd do the same for me .
be with me, tonight .
( chours )
for you i'd fall, fall in the deep blue sea,
for you i'd crawl over the hottest of fire.
i wont let you get away, i'll do anything to keep you, keep you here with me .
( humming )
hold me close, lovingly, tight in you're arms is simply heaven to me .
a dream unseen, unheard conciously .
(---alarm clock rings---)
( spoken ):dont tell me i was only dreaming !
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Nikki ~
This is very good! Is this a first draft? What type of music do you have for this? A little tweaking here and there and it's good as gold.
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yes, it's a first draft.
no music yet .
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