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RT .23
by Fdemetrio - 05/17/26 09:23 AM
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HER TOWN
by Fdemetrio - 05/14/26 10:26 AM
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by bennash - 05/14/26 10:03 AM
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by Fdemetrio - 05/13/26 06:53 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/12/26 06:47 PM
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ok, here's another one with myself and Phillip Wardlaw collab
WE NEED A MALE SINGER/GUITAR ON THIS IF ANY OF YOU GUYS WANNA 3 WAY CO-WRITE WITH US..WE'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT ALOT ..THANKS GLYN
She Drove Me To Drink/I'm Enjoying The Ride
When we first wed
making up was worth the battle
now what's gonna happen to us
will our love survive or crumble
this state of wedding bliss
we're both suppose to be under
ain't worth her Devil's kiss
Yeah, She Drove Me To Drink
And I'm Enjoying The Ride
It's been a long time
since we had a big fight
started out, not a big deal
gone to Hell by midnight
everythings out in the open
nothing left to hide
now a drink's my true passion
She Drove me to Drink
and I'm Enjoying The Ride
The up's and Down's
are turning my life inside out
my favorite drink used to be
sweet iced tea no doubt
now it's crown and coke
or something so strong
to make even a preacher chain smoke
Yeah, She Drove Me To Drink
And I'm Enjoying The Ride
It's been a long time
since we had a big fight
started out, not a big deal
gone to Hell by midnight
everythings out in the open
nothing else left to hide
now a drink's my true passion
She Drove me to Drink
and I'm Enjoying The Ride
Yeah, She Drove Me To Drink
And I'm Enjoying The Ride
phillipwardlaw/glyn
copyright2011/BMI
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Now, this one has some real good lines.. and I really like that hook!  Looking good! I can hear this one! --Jen
The dictionary is the only place where success comes before work.--Mark Twain
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Yep, but still have some arranging to do, maybe I'll try to sing it, then i'll know what to move and what to change, well maybe it will help anyway... thanks for checking it out for us...phillip and glyn
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A good hook Glyn as Jen said.I had it down as a slow country song with a hint of blues in there.
Regards
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi Travis, well actually Phillip is the one that came up with the hook and lyric, i'm just trying to help him out a little with it, don't know how much help i've been, but hey, i'm trying...and yes I can see it slow country with a hint of blues....thanks glyn
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Take me with you!!!! I need a drink too!!!!
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Thanks Sam , well jump in as I drive by....lol
glyn
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Thank you for working with me on these!
This life of ours, this is a wonderful life. If you can get through life like this and get away with it, hey that's great. But it's very unpredictable. There's so many ways you can screw it up.
Paul Castellano
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Hi Glyn,
Hey you two have a good one here. I don't know how many times I've heard someone say that hook. LOl. Or at least some version of it--like she's gonna drive me to drink. LOl. I'm not sure how commercial it might be--only because you know the sentiment on nash--don't paint the female in a bad way--but I'm good with it. I'd love to hear some music to it. Could be a good one. Take care,
Roger
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Very creative hook and some nice lyrics. I can't wait to hear it!
Jennifer (Jinx) Shaner
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Hey, we need a male singer/guitar to this, does anyone of you guys wanna a 3 way co'write on this one, Phillip and I both would appreciate it very, very much...tks glyn
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Phillip and Glyn, Great hook! Suggestions comments below, keep or sweep making up was worth the battlewill our love survive or crumble( I'd like a closer rhyme) everythings out in the opennow a drink's my true passion( rhyme mate should be closer) The up's and Down's are turning my life inside out my favorite drink used to be sweet iced tea no doubt ( tag-on for rhyme sake--"if it can be be deleted, then it's not needed")
“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard
Co-writing = Compromise!
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This life of ours, this is a wonderful life. If you can get through life like this and get away with it, hey that's great. But it's very unpredictable. There's so many ways you can screw it up.
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Yep, I like it, great potential.
Trust in the LORD with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding. In all thy ways acknowledge Him and He shall direct thy paths.
Proverbs 3:5-6
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Not much critique from me here. Nice job you two.
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good hook and all, been done a bit much but... the biggest thing is really a major break down in structure, have you put music to it? cuz from where i am at , it would be hard , meter seems off. some good digs , dont get me wrong , but really shocked none else said this , could just be me ? rock on ,
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