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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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Misfits backflash throw back collage panoramic mozaic playful splits beware the unknowing populace parachutes open color us misfits a cylindrical castle our abode lined with candy cane verandas we speak in a multi-syllabic code purple turtles have all the answers in every window a flower pot a rainbow crystal carousel tressles cast a aromatic spell every one has no one has not backflash throw back collage panoramic mozaic playful splits beware the unknowing populace parachutes open color us misfits there's no table of contents just use a touch of common sense spiral stairwells some lead nowhere your dreams are located over there pastels adorn the oblong walls spirits colide inside semi circles exploding into miniscule balls a picturesque life infamous, non-surgical backflash throw back collage panoramic mozaic playful splits beware the unknowing populace parachutes open color us misfits © 2004 by ritt ® 2994 by random noise music ------------------ http://www.ampcast.com/music/26305/artist.php [This message has been edited by sweetjoyce (edited 06-23-2004).] [This message has been edited by sweetjoyce (edited 06-23-2004).]
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Earlier I was reworking an old song lyric, and i didn't like how it was turning out, so i erased and wrote a whole new song not resembling the other one. ------------------ http://www.ampcast.com/music/26305/artist.php
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just so I know whether or not I understand let me repeat what you just stated:
Earlier you were reworking an old song lyric, and you didn't like how it was turning out, so you erased and wrote a whole new song not resembling the other one.
wow, that was heavy...is the song that's posted here the new song or the song before it was reworked?
I love the turtles and your dreams are located over there...freaking me out...your name's really alice in wonderlust...the spiral stairs reminds me of a picture I once saw of stairs that interconnected with one another but some upside down with people walking upside down...actually I think the whole song reminds me of that picture...abstract and where's tricia's bong
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I thought the first one you had up was pretty cool, IMO.
Mel
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Hi Linda lets see the old song is somewhere but not here; actually you can use the search thingie and find it; same title same user name; romantic ditty, really not bad, but I believe our audience wants some different more unique, and with a title like misfits it would be a travesty to give them the same old same old. Hi again Linda and thanks, glad you liked the images, and yes i typed it straight onto jpf, one shot 15 minutes; when the feeling strikes attack!!!!!!! ------------------ http://www.ampcast.com/music/26305/artist.php
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"Let themmmm eat caaaaaaaake"!
You're really good at writing what comes to your mind instantly! Impressive work of art
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Oh. Scuse me. I thought you were talking about me and Calvin........not Picasso. ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/wink.gif)
"Grits is one of those country-boy words that is both singular and plural-like deer, elk and sheep. I think the singular is appropriate when there's a modifier that makes it clear one is talking about something specific. Like, 'Grits are good for you, but these here grits is tasty.'"~~Joe Wrabek
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Tricia how soon we forget, you are not a misfit; sorry this song is not about you. ------------------ http://www.ampcast.com/music/26305/artist.php
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Ok. Fine then. I'll go eat some peanut M&M's and drown my pain. ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif)
"Grits is one of those country-boy words that is both singular and plural-like deer, elk and sheep. I think the singular is appropriate when there's a modifier that makes it clear one is talking about something specific. Like, 'Grits are good for you, but these here grits is tasty.'"~~Joe Wrabek
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Sweetjoyce, these are some fine lyrics. They create many images in my mind. I like... The language might be a bit sophisticated for commercial appeal but to me that's never a good enough reason to not like a song. Kudos... BTW, I'm never going to live long enough for your trademark to be in effect. Does that mean I can steal "random noise music?" ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/biggrin.gif) Van
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But, I see alot of references about me.......ie: purple turtles-I have one, he just ain't purple. flower pot-needs no explanation. non-surgical-I'm a nurse. playful-Yes, I am. collage-I'm artsy, craftsy and a wanttabe photographer. Ok, that about sums up my case.
"Grits is one of those country-boy words that is both singular and plural-like deer, elk and sheep. I think the singular is appropriate when there's a modifier that makes it clear one is talking about something specific. Like, 'Grits are good for you, but these here grits is tasty.'"~~Joe Wrabek
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Watcha think C, can Tricia be a misfit¿
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Ritt
That woman is such a nice woman she has to be a misfit.
Hey Ritt
I really like it.
Ritt Caroll Lewis's son.
"in every window a flower pot
a rainbow crystal carousel
tressles cast a aromatic spell
every one has no one has not"
Heh that might be where you grow it but I bet you smoke it everywhere.
Seriously, I really enjoyed this.
Eric
If you're going to judge someone, do it on the side of mercy.
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Hey Buzz Thanks, is commercialism a religion? i can always find an occult following lol Jon is a man of few words, so when i asked him about someone stealing random noise music, he didn't say anything. ------------------ http://www.ampcast.com/music/26305/artist.php
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Sweetjoyce, these are some fine lyrics. They create many images in my mind. I like... The language might be a bit sophisticated for commercial appeal but to me that's never a good enough reason to not like a song. Kudos... BTW, I'm never going to live long enough for your trademark to be in effect. Does that mean I can steal "random noise music?" Van Van, never sell yourself short when it comes to life expectancy. Don't consume beverage alcohol. Smoke tobacco in moderation. Limit recreational "illicit drug" use to actual recreation, if needed, and for heaven's sake lay off the caffeine and Cola drinks, if you imbibe.
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Perhaps this one would be difficult for a singer to deliver as written, but as someone else said earlier, this is a work of art.....
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WOW, Snake
Rarely do I look back, but a friend alerted me, I was showcasing well at the JPF museum of off the wall misfits, and I'm glad to see this lyric on that very same wall !
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I'm not off the wall........I'm sweet. 
"Grits is one of those country-boy words that is both singular and plural-like deer, elk and sheep. I think the singular is appropriate when there's a modifier that makes it clear one is talking about something specific. Like, 'Grits are good for you, but these here grits is tasty.'"~~Joe Wrabek
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ha.
I like this....
a cylindrical castle our abode
lined with candy cane verandas
and this....
your dreams are located over there
Tricia is too nice to be a misfit, but she's sooo nice, we let her be anything she wants to be.
Calvin
htp://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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