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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Soft Loft
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 11:52 AM
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Spiritbox
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/18/26 09:51 PM
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Hi Friends,
Did a rewrite on this one. I have a nice melody for the chorus and bridge. AAnd a little something for the verses. See if I made any improvements to it!
Thanks!
Ron
"Bring Back My Heart" Genre:Soft Rock Artist: Female
(c)2001 Ron Boyte
v1
When we met, my eyes found yours
Looking back, at me in Joe's Place
Your hands were wrapped around another
I couldn't breathe; thought she was your lover
v2
As you walked, you looked self assured
Bending down, you spoke so gently
I couldn't hear; your words kept fading
I almost slipped, my knees started shaking
v3
Then we touched, I burned with desire
Asked to dance, my heart beat loudly
You grabbed my waist. And, pulled me closer
We slowly kissed; the night's quickly over
chorus
Bring back my heart, for I've got to know
Bring back my love, for I need him so
Bring back my heart
Bring back my heart
bridge
Got to know, who's lips I'm kissing
Got to know, who's arms I'm caressing
Got to know, if I'll be missing
Your love, if you're not with me
chorus
Bring back my heart, for I've got to know
Bring back my love, for I need him so
Bring back my heart
Bring back my heart
chorus/repeat
Bring back my heart, for I've got to know
Bring back my love, for I need him so
Bring back my heart
Bring back my heart
Written By: Ron Boyte
20455 Cr 146 Tyler, Tx. 75703 Ph/Fax: (903) 894-5634
Email: RBoyte7293@aol.com
All Material CopyRight Protected! All Rights Reserved!
[This message has been edited by Ron Boyte (edited 02-15-2001).]
[This message has been edited by Ron Boyte (edited 02-15-2001).]
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Ron, hot stuff here!! LOL Might be a good idea, posting this way to give folks a better idea of the flow. Have a suggestion for last 2 lines of bridge:
"Got to know if you'll be missing
My love when you're not with me"
Just seemed to fit better.
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Ron..I may be having a DENSE FOG DAY IN my case that's a HAIR better than a red-HAIRED moment....but anyhow.. I don't get the Joe's place...are you talkin about a Place...or are you talkin about bein in a person's place..didn't register.. in Pennsylvania.. Kaley ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif)
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Hi Bama!
Thanks for taking a peek at this one! This has happened to me too many times to remember, but I woke up at about 3am this morning, had to take care of business, if you know what I mean. Got back in bed; almost asleep, and wham! I had to get up and write it. The music, with all the instruments playing took over my mind until I became fully awake! Any hoo, I managed to get most of it down. Nice little sound to it, but, even though I managed to get it on the recorder, I will never capture it again, I am sure! Ha!
Thanks for the suggestions, I will take a look at this again, and soon!
Take care!
Ron Boyte
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Hi Kaley!
You must have been posting as I was responding to Bama! Ha!
Joe's Place, well, don't be embarrassed; it is a bar. I guess people don't go to bars like they once did. At least, I know this people don't. Ha! Never liked them much anyway.
Something else, you may have picked up on though, this lyric is about dancing and how this Lady has a crush on a Guy that has asked her to dance. Thought it was kind of a neat concept. Worth a try anyway! Ha!
Thanks mucho for the peeko!
Ron Boyte
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Hi!
Sorry to have to move this one! But, I did a rewrite and would appreciate the comments!
Thanks!
Ron Boyte
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Hi Ron
I like this and really think its a good song.
Guess I missed it the first time around though.
May be a typo but the word is "breathe" not breath.
good writing!
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