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Real Deal
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/07/26 01:38 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/06/26 05:36 PM
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“ EYES OF CAROLINE "
(c) 2002 Ronald Boyte Code 0602
intro
Lost in her eyes I drift away ---
v 1
Sixteen Junior High And girls
It's a lot to comprehend
But Then again A boy has the right
To ponder how the world keeps sight
build
Of how I spend my nights
chorus
Nights I dream of lovely things
Walking corridors of my mind
Trapped in recesses play time
Beautiful Beautiful nights Nights with Caroline
v 2
My Queen sails on feet of Gods
Wisping hair’s thin threads of gold
Her soul’s grown bold And sings me to sleep
With promise vowing love to keep
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Oh how we spend the night
chorus
Nights I dream of lovely things
Walking corridors of my mind
Trapped in recesses play time
Beautiful Beautiful nights Nights with Caroline
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In class I sit behind her
Seldom seeing her face
Day dreaming she's in my arms
Miss Lander's voice pulls laughter's alarm
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Too shy I can only dream
One night our telephone rings
Malcolm The phone's for you
Caroline Caroline who?
chorus (mod last line)
Nights I dream of lovely things
Walking corridors of my mind
Trapped in recesses play time
Beautiful Beautiful eyes Eyes of Caroline ---
Fade out
Beautiful Beautiful eyes Eyes of Caroline ---
* End
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Ron, quite the different format here with repeating the same word twice in the choral areas.....It was hard for me to wrap my tongue around "beautiful beautiful nights nights...." but then I'm not so talented eithter....best wishes ------------------ http://www.songramp.com/homepage.ez?Who=sharonirenewells
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Hello Sharon!
Seems I remember us talking about the double usage of words! Lol!
Thanks for commenting!
Ron
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Hey Texas!!
Nice one here!! Those last two lines throw me though. Got a suggestion for that outro---
"Those Beautiful....
Those beautiful eyes of .....
Caroline" X-2
Really good heartfelt lyrics here Ron!!
Sonny
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Hi Sonny! Good to hear from you! I'd looked for a recent post of yours too. But, no? Thanks for the idea. Actually there's a pause that seems to work concerning the line both you and Sharon had noticed. It works; at least in my mind, ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif) Take care Okie Dude! Ron
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Ron,
Nice song. DIdn't have a problem with the line in question. I read it like this:
Beautiful, beautiful nights.....(Pause here)
Nights with Caroline.
Am I close?
Alan
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When you talk, you say something you already know...
If you listen, you might learn something new.
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Hi Alan!
You hit it on the head!
Thanks for checking this one out!
Ron
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Hello Ron,... some well writen lines..!!!! wondrin about a few things.... My son is 14...and is older for...the 8th grade...because he has an early autumn birthday...and I had the option to send him or not....and chose not..... am i understanding..the 16 and Junior High?.. around here..many graduate from high school at 17...and 18... and if you DO drop the age back some Ron.... I'm wondrin...although i'm not naive and..realize this happens.... i'm wondrin.. about the 14 or 15 year old...singin..about his nighttime. recess and play....?... just some thoughts... probably the odd "gal"..out on this one, kaley
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Hi Kaley! Actually you've made a very good call! It had not dawned on me concerning the age I'd chosen and Junior High. 16 is a little off base. I'll adjust! Hope all has been going well. I'd noticed towards the end of last year that you were not as active as before? Good to see that changing. Take care! Ron
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