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Real Deal
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/07/26 01:38 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/06/26 05:36 PM
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Joined: Nov 2002
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It'd mean a lot to us if u could tell us what u think of our new song "friends with benefits" thanks alot!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/matureaddictionusmusic.htm Werms Mature Addiction ------------------ thanks for listening Werms
thanks for listening
Werms
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Werms,
I heard you song. I like it. Sounds like alt/rock, which I love.
I couldn't hear some of the words in the verses though. The idea is clear.
Your title, hook, and chorus are nice.
I myself, would dis-card the lead, and write
a bridge; short, make it different, maybe try an off-beat time signature, or change the rhythm or chord structure. Build it up to attract attention, and emotion to your last chorus.
Try to keep the length under 3 minutes.
Good jammin'
Cal
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I get a song called "Friends with Benefits" at least every couple of months. It's an interesting topic, but my advice is to try to think of a new way to talk about it. ------------------ KR TIP SHEET - Film/TV Music Placement and more... www.krtipsheet.com
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