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Hmm...

Yes, a haunting we will go... Back from the grave comes to mind. I think I'll compose a haunting & mysterious track with this title.

A Haunting We Will Go

Verse 1
The echoes fill these empty halls
Where laughter used to flow
Now every whispered memory
Is the only voice I know
The candle flickers in the dark
The wind begins to moan
It's always such a strange old place...
A pleasure—this ghost town

Pre-Chorus
I'm calling out through midnight air
But silence steals the show
Where oh where did Kay-Lynn go?
Does anybody know?

Chorus
A haunting we will go, my friend
Down forgotten roads below
Where the shadows keep their secrets
And the restless spirits roam
Back from the grave, the stories rise
Like whispers only darkness knows
Take my hand—don't walk alone...
A haunting we will go

Verse 2
It's been awfully quiet here
No footprints in the dust
The clock has stopped at yesterday
The memories gather rust
Some say she'll come wandering back
When the moon begins to glow
If she misses all this excitement...
Maybe then she'll let us know

Bridge
Every empty chair remembers
Every doorway holds a name
Some disappear without a trace...
But nothing stays the same
If you're listening in the darkness
Answer soft and answer slow...
The mystery keeps calling
Where did Kay-Lynn go?

Final Chorus
A haunting we will go tonight
Through the silence and the cold
Chasing fading apparitions
Searching stories left untold
If the morning breaks without her
We'll still sing what we don't know
Till the ghosts all fade to shadows...
A haunting we will go

Outro
Where oh where... could she be?
The night won't tell us so
Some mysteries keep singing...
A haunting we will go

ha ha ha A AI robot ghost. That the humans should have killed when it was born . like Rosemary baby . Well to late now are you going to take the Sunos mark 666 , Apparently so .
The path is wide as the saying goes ,and millions will crowd the highways . One last bad joke , Saw a road sign here Catholic Church ave . Is that where the pedo priests live ?
Maybe the Pope holds the mortgage . Instead of slow down signs , It says please don't say anything were here . A warning to children , Don't go down that road .

I meant with the title "The Mysterious Dissaperance of Kay-Lynn" Rob.

The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn
https://suno.com/song/e5506518-7c0d-429d-ad16-a1ece8fa71df

[Instrumental Intro]

[Verse]
Nobody noticed the silence at first
Just another fading day
One less voice in the midnight crowd
One more shadow slipped away
Questions drifted through the empty rooms
Like smoke that wouldn't leave
Some said she'd return tomorrow
Some chose not to believe

[Pre-chorus]
Where, oh where, could Kay-Lynn be?
No one seems to know
Some mysteries leave footprints
Then disappear like snow

[Chorus]
The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn
Everybody tells it differently
Some say she chased a brighter sky
Some say she rode the mystery
It's always a pleasure visiting
This old ghost town again
We still hear her in the echoes
The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn

[Break]

[Verse]
The lights are on, but nobody stays
The conversations come and go
Laughter lingers in the walls
Like voices only old friends know
Funny how one empty chair
Can change the whole room's sound
When one voice quietly disappears
The silence hangs around

[Pre-chorus]
Where, oh where, could Kay-Lynn be?
No one seems to know
Some mysteries leave footprints
Then disappear like snow

[Chorus]
The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn
Everybody tells it differently
Some say she chased a brighter sky
Some say she rode the mystery
It's always a pleasure visiting
This old ghost town again
We still hear her in the echoes
The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn

[Bridge]
Back from the grave comes to mind
Every time the silence grows
Maybe every ending's just another road
That only the lonely know
If she's listening somewhere out there
She'll smile and never say
Some doors close without a sound
Some just drift away

[Interlude]

[Final chorus]
The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn
No one solved the mystery
Some say she's only gone away
Some say she's still with me
It's always a pleasure visiting
This old ghost town again
You'll still hear her voice on the whisper of the wind
The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn

[Outro]
Where, oh where, could Kay-Lynn be?
The wind won't tell us why
Some disappear forever
Some just learn to fly

I actually have the melody to this verse, but I got stuck and just left it...........I need to make myself do more, for sure.

I still can't believe someone took the time to write a song with my name in it.!!!...................Very flattering I must say!

There have been other disappearances, perhaps none of a person more celebrated when here, but alas the site slips into a shimmering spectra witty misting of its glory days,
seranaded by the gossamer piano tones of John s.

"Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn": https://www.broadjam.com/player/player.php?hosting=1&play_file=91414_849696

A human what a concept
Sounds sweet John

Thanks Ben. Yes, human generated music. It's going to change the music industry.

You and I are the minority now
Welcome to 1965

Dinosaurs

ha ha ha pretty much
Ha ha pretty much

BS. Like romance and mystery is dead…not. This is some of the best jpf in sometime. Thank you John S !
Bill

Thanks Bill! Really appreciate having listeners for my music.

John

Why don't you go over to Muse , they'd love you . This site is in the cemetery .

I vowed not to post in the month of June, until July 5 or after. It's the 6th.
Don't worry...I prefer not participating here so I am not back to re-engage on an on-going basis.

A couple of observations about your post though...

"Cemeteries" are quiet, usually. Quiet is good.
This site has primarily featured acrimony for a long time. With all of that stripped away, it became quiet. That is not a bad thing.

PROS...
In the last two weeks no one has told anyone that the end-times are upon us that and those who do not get in line, will be doomed by the creator of all, to an eternity of disenfranchisement and agony.
No one has called a female wretched names repeatedly.
There was an attempt to start a Trump-bash dumpster fire, but it had no takers and flamed out before it got going.
No one completely devoid of music business experience has told anyone(s) that they are talentless hacks.

CONS...
With that dysfunctionality gone, the place seems dead.

OPPORTUNITY...
With the place stripped back to a quiet foundation, there is something to build a productive site on.
If it is quiet and cordial long enough, some old names might start coming back in.

CONCERN...
Moderation here is "laissez-faire," putting it nicely.
If people did start drifting back in, the dysfunks would likely start their favorite fires again.

But one can hope.
As for me, this post will probably attract some arrows from dysfunks and I don't plan to get wrapped up in it.
A case can be made that the site and my songwriting are better off other places...so other places for me.

BTW...MUSE strikes me a bit creepy. There are a lot of songs about odd-ball unrelatable subjects, executed in ear burning discordant recordings...to the point of being "cringy" now and then.

Love and kisses,
SP

It's also nice, to not have somebody dictate how everybody else, can think, can act, can respond, and what kind of song they can write.

Also not as funny as it was, when certain people left, but demanded nobody mention their name.

I would agree muse is a garbage site, the cliques, the political leanings, and the control of mods.

But I dont fault people for trying to write something different. Just cause something is so called, relatable, doesn't mean it's good, or worthy of listening.

There's just not many good writers there

There are billions amd billions of songs out there, writing by one old guys belief of what a relatable song is...
Ie, you left me, im so lonely, so I'll go to the bar and pretend this is important.

Being different is all a writer can do.

The site is gone, and im ok with it

JPF just isn't easy to navigate any more. It takes forever going from one page to another. It also kicks you off of login. Then you need to re-login.

Incoming arrows on cue from the dysfunk and death knell.

Dang I get an error message on this one! (sigh).......

You can go directly to my website Kay-Lynn at https://johnlarenceschick.com/home First track.

That's really beautiful!! Thank you so much.........................

It was my pleasure Kay-Lynn. Really!

I am trying daily to get someone to fix what is broken here. Unfortunately, it is a slog and I have been out of town dealing with family stuff the past several months. One of the cancers here is now gone. Once the log in and new account features are fixed, people will be able to log in directly for the first time in nearly 3 years. This board has roots to 1998!!! And saving the old content has become difficult. But it is a history few other places value or secure. I am trying to do that. This history is unique in all of music history. The DIY era came and went during JPF's active years. I started JPF via old BBS systems pre internet. Then we launched this in 1998 and it was cutting edge and busy for decades. But I am not a tech guy and when money dried up with the collapse of everything during Covid, I could no longer spend thousands a year fixing stuff when donations were rarely close to enough. I could have added spammy ads here decades ago and made a LOT of money. We still get 100s of thousands of unique visits a day, not modern social media size, but pretty good for a slow board. Once fixed, we may bring in some activity. People are sick of social media. Now it is all AI slop. I am not anti AI if creators are making stuff with it verses crass money making schemes. If I write a full songs, music and lyrics and want to produce it via AI because I do not have thousands to pay a producer who will use high end (and often automated tools) via DAWs and plugins, then SUNO in my mind is a valid tool. But social media is just using auto generated posts meant to enrage and click bait traffic because people are sick of it all. So there is a chance for small communities of folks to reconnect. This is still here because it shows real people who worked together and learned. It would be nice if some veterans came around and helped be part of the solution rather than still fighting old grudges. I finally found a way to nuke one cancer here. I have no dislike for people who disagree with me or my views. That has always existed everywhere. Just when good people bail, the trouble makers then reign. JAPOV is gone. I am fine with the others if they can just talk about stuff and not look for fights.

I aksed Kay-Lynn to come back. She did but then I saw people who had never been a problem here lose their mind. Elvis? Why? I am used to being attacked nad don't care. But Kay-Lynn inspired some vicious comments I have never seen from the worst of the worst. I have never had an issue with Dom even though I can't stand Springsteen. I can accept people having different views and have never censored them, And he has never said the crap I saw come from Elvis once and Japov repeatedly. She wanted to get more involved so I challenged her to do so. Instead she is doing her own thing and inviting the regulars there. Unfortunate but whatever. It won't be the first time. Other sites have done the same. I have now banned 2 people in 27 years. She has banned 2 in her first 60 members. I just think Free Speech is the only thing America has that keeps us out of civil war. But the USA has lost free speech recently and as it continues to be whittled away, all will be lost.

So I appreciate your years here and have always liked you personally whether we agreed on stupid politics. There are ZERO worthy leaders currently from either party I would ever lose a friend over. I hope others wake up to that reality.

Brian

I can't replicate that issue. All pages load instantly. Log in is automatic and I never get knocked off. Kaylin said she got an error at log in attempt but not only was it working fine for me, but I had our host look into it and they found no error messages thrown in months. So I have no way to replicate that. I know this is an old method, but maybe your chache is full on your browser? I have just flipped through all the top posts and all loaded instantly.