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Mr. Always Right
https://soundclick.com/song/15132344

[Intro]
Whoa, Mr. Always Right

[Verse]
He’s got a PhD in every thread
A keyboard crown upon his head
Scroll too far, you’ll feel the flame
He’s calling names and spreading blame

[Pre-chorus]
He don’t argue — no, he educates
And when he’s cornered, he elevates

[Chorus]
Whoa, Mr. Always Right
Preaching loud into the night
He’s the storm that stirs the fight
He vents, he bites, ignites the site
Whoa, Mr. Always Right

[Break]

[Verse]
You can talk about love, or cars, or pie
But mention politics —oh my, oh my!
His face turns red, the caps lock flies
The thread explodes, and reason dies

[Pre-chorus]
He don’t argue — no, he educates
And when he’s cornered, he elevates

[Chorus]
Whoa, Mr. Always Right
Preaching loud into the night
He’s the storm that stirs the fight
He vents, he bites, ignites the site
Whoa, Mr. Always Right

[Bridge]
He’s the maestro of the meltdown
A poet of the feud
He’ll twist your words to fit his mood
Then blame you for being rude

[Breakdown – spoken]
“Now listen, I’m not aggressive. I’m just correct.”

[Interlude]

[Chorus]
Whoa, Mr. Always Right
Preaching loud into the night
He’s the storm that stirs the fight
He vents, he bites, ignites the site
Whoa, Mr. Always Right

[Outro]
He vents, he bites, he picks a fight
Whoa, Mr. Always Right

I think I know who's this is aimed at lol

Sounds good Robert

Lol...

Ben,
Thanks for the feedback! I love the laid-back vibe of this one, and the vocals sound awesome. Just to clarify, this song isn’t about any real person—I’ve moved on from writing songs about Trump. This character is entirely fictional.

Lol...

I'm not sure if you think these lines are good or not .... Anyway Tony, thanks for taking the time to look at my lyrics.

ok its just a assumption on my part

This thread just got over 100 views in 2 hours????

I just wanted to point out that you can hear spoken vocals in this track. To achieve this, I embedded prompts in the lyrics. I left them in so you can see how I did it — in case you ever want to try something similar in the future.

I think your title is universally relatable... You should re-work the lyric

Any suggestions Tony?

This is a great production, in my opinion shouldn't be wasted on Dictates.

It's best as a love song Mrs always right.
That's what I call a good groove too

But it is funny and nails him

Hey Dom,
thanks for the feedback. You like the groove? Guess what? Syncopated drums and funky bass. Those are awesome prompts.

Sure... Let's just have a conversation about it


My eX was "always right", especially when she was drunk lol.
She's the reason I now go months at a time without drinking... It's just not as much fun as it used to be.
She could rationalize ANYTHING, and ignored EVERYTHING that challenged her sensibilities. If the gas bill cut into her beer and hamburger budget, she would buy the groceries and proclaim, "I'm a grown woman... I'm not going to do without!"
She maxed all her credit cards and said, "Relax, there's nothing they can do about it..."
She would also provide the kids with an excuse for anything and simply say, "All they need is love!" "Tell the little fuk'ers to quit drinking my beer!"
Needless to say... politics, religion, and my bank account, were the reasons I turned the garage into my man-cave until the youngest turned 18.
Her "counselor" actually told me to do that lol.

Chance of wasted time and effort
That voice will make your head hurt
But, Little miss always right
Sure has a short skirt...

Lol, I think I would write a cautionary tale.

Yeah it works, but remember we are night and day in styles

Ok Dom,
Is this what you mean?

Mrs. Always Right
https://soundclick.com/song/15132949


[Intro]
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right

[Verse]
She’s got a halo and a little sass
A mirror that don’t need no glass
She reads my mind before I speak
And wins the fight by the end of the week

[Pre-chorus]
She don’t argue — no, she illustrates
Then smiles at me while she educates

[Chorus]
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right
She’s shining like a neon light
She’s got the last word wrapped up tight
Turns every wrong into delight
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right

[Break]

[Verse]
She’s got charm and a knowing grin
Lets me believe that I might win
But every time, I see the signs —
She’s three steps past the finish line

[Pre-chorus]
She don’t argue — no, she demonstrates
Then laughs so sweet my heart vibrates

[Chorus]
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right
She’s shining like a neon light
She’s got the last word wrapped up tight
Turns every wrong into delight
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right

[Bridge]
Yeah, I’m her fool and proud to be
She runs this show so easily
When she’s near, the world’s aligned
And I don’t even mind

[Breakdown – spoken]
“I’m not agreeing, I’m just… strategically surrendering.”

[Interlude]

[Chorus]
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right
She’s shining like a neon light
She’s got the last word wrapped up tight
Turns every wrong into delight
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right

[Outro]
Yeah, she’s the reason wrong feels right
Whoa, Mrs. Always Right

Ahaa I knew it was a love song.

Yeah works well, right on radio today

Thanks, Tony — I really appreciate the input, but I have to admit I’m leaning toward Dom’s twist on this one. This thread’s turning into a real songwriting melting pot!

I think there are artsy kinda songs, dig deeper into the human psyche, then there are pop songs not meant to be too deep or over thought.

If your goal is what's happening on radio today, this might even be better than it

Thanks, Dom — that means a lot. I always try to write with radio airplay in mind, so I’m glad to hear this one feels like it could fit right in.

Dom,
it will be interesting to hear what my wife thinks about this one tomorrow morning. Thank you for the inspiration.