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TROLL-IN-A HOLE

(more experimentation with rap)

https://suno.com/s/dFvNgxndDEZGNUSi

REVISION 250831 #10 (see lyrics in later posts or in SUNO)
https://suno.com/s/vdhG2OUIMeIF9S9A


There once was a troll, he live like a mole in a hole,
pissing people off was his only life goal.
Tried to act big, he just a sad little soul.

There once was a troll, his life so sad.
pissing people off, only talent he had.
only time he glad, when he make people mad.

There once was a troll
Thousand miles away, He act real tuff
But everybody say, he aint really got stuff
Jus’ a pussy cream puff, pretendin’ like he ruff.
Enuf! Enuf!

There once was a troll, he thought he was smart
but every time he talked, it sounded like a fart.
Gave long-winded lessons showin’ how to be a fool
dis’ ghoul-stool-fool just drool like a tool.

Troll rattle like a garbage can rollin’ down a hill.
Slingin’ trash along, mouth never be still.
Mail room boy, only job he eva had…now what?
But he lost that cuz he too dumb…to shut-up!

All ways be raggin’ ‘bout the talent he has.
They got mo’ talent in a third grade class.
Don’t stop that fool from bumpin’ his gum,
He too dumb to know, he too damn dumb.

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy he be all grow’d

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy he be all grow’d

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy he be all grow’d

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy he be all grow’d

Marty,
this is great! It's obvious that this is about one of our fellow songwriters here on this site. The wording is perfect for this kind of genre. I know it's not easy to write rap lyrics and you did an awesome job. It's like you've been writing rap lyrics for ages. These lines work very well. I especially like the "Say Whut" line that you've used before. You're building a trademark here. Thanks for sharing this.

Thanks Rob.

I never liked rap before, but it's fun to write. And it exercises internal rhymes.

But, officially the song is about no one in particular.
This is an ode to trolls everywhere.
However it may have received some inspiration from this site. The muse works in mysterious ways.
Headed out for a meal. Have a good (whatever-time-of-day) it is where you are.

Marty

250831 TROLL IN A HOLE - some additions (work in progress)

https://suno.com/s/vdhG2OUIMeIF9S9A

Troll’s only claim to fame
Is callin’ otha people names.

There once was a troll, he live like a mole in a hole,
pissing people off was his only life goal.
Tried to act big, he just a sad little soul.

There once was a troll, his life so sad.
pissing people off, only talent he had.
only time he glad, when he make people mad.

He say he great, he blow and he blow.
But stuff he put up aint nothing to show.
He hold up a turd like it diamond that glow.
But everybody know, he can't neva pass go.

There once was a troll
Thousand miles away, He act real tuff
But everybody say, he aint really got stuff
Jus’ a pussy cream puff, pretendin’ like he ruff.
Enough, enough

The troll make trouble, it fill his empty life.
He aint got nuthin but other people’s strife.
Aint neva been in love, no one wanna be his wife.
If he was a cop, he’d be a Barney Fife.

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy, he be all grow’d

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy, he be all grow’d

There once was a troll, he thought he was smart
but every time he talked, it sounded like a fart.
Gave long-winded lessons showin’ how to be a fool
dis’ ghoul-stool-fool just drool like a tool.

Troll rattle like a garbage can rollin’ down a hill.
Slingin’ trash along, mouth never be still.
Mail room boy, only job he eva had…now what?
But he lost that cuz he too dumb…to shut-up!

All ways be raggin’ ‘bout the talent he has.
They got mo’ talent in a third grade class.
Don’t stop that fool from bumpin’ his gum,
He too dumb to know, he too damn dumb.

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy, he be all grow’d

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy, he be all grow’d

There once was a troll, He thought he was a brewsa,
Even he say, he just a tragic loosa.
Spend all his day, tappin his computa
Lots of silly [naughty word removed], but nothin we can use-a

He got no job, he while away his time
Slacking all his days on someone else’s dime.
If fool-punk was eva made a crime.
He’d be locked away until the end of time

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy he be all grow’d

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy he be all grow’d

Troll’s only claim to fame
Is callin’ otha people names.
Got no shame, got no brain
On this earth, he aint nuthin but a stain.

Say Whaaaaaat!
He’s a troll in a hole!
Say Whaaaaaat!
Mail room boy he be all grow’d

Lol love it Marty not my favourite genre but yes it works.
Amazing where ideas emerge from!
John

LOL,

Thanks John.
I'm still trying to figure out what inspired this writing.

Have a great day.