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ai Tip
by Fdemetrio - 05/13/25 07:47 AM
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A Kiss
by Marilyn Oakley - 05/11/25 09:18 PM
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Doughlas Murphy and me working on this lyric
It reads some better--Put some music to it if you like!
See if you can build on this, Mackie.
NEED YOUR SWEET LOVING
© 2023 Mackie Humphries abd Douglas Murphy
V1
It all started
Just past midnight
You slammed the door
And drove away
CH
Girl I’m missin’ you
Let me take back
My angry words
I’ll do anything
To heal the hurt
I am nothing without you
V2
I wasn’t thinking
Wanting you gone
I’m still your fool
Cryin’ here alone
CH
Girl I’m missin’ you
Let me take back
My angry words
I’ll do anything
To heal the hurt
I am nothing without you
Girl it’s up to you
I need your loving
YOUR SWEET loving
CH
Now I’m missin’ you
Let me take back
My angry words
I’ll do anything
To heal the hurt
I am nothing without you
Girl it’s up to you
I need your loving
YOUR SWEET loving
MACKIE
Last edited by Mackie H.; 02/05/23 12:36 PM.
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Douglas
Made some changes
Mackie
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Hi Mackie,
I don't know if you remember me but I certainly remember you. Good to see that you are still writing. I always liked your style. I hope life is treating you well. I just started picking up the pen again after a 9 year hiatus. Hopefully, I'll get in the flow again and get to visit with you a little. As for the write, it is very well structured and has a good flow to it. I enjoyed the positive message as well. Regards.
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