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ai Tip
by Fdemetrio - 05/13/25 07:47 AM
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A Kiss
by Marilyn Oakley - 05/11/25 09:18 PM
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Make my dreams come true
Verse
On the front porch in the moonlight
You hesitate to leave.
Do you sense that I want you
As bad as you want me?
Pre-Chorus
Take advantage of the moonlight
Let it set the mood.
You know that you want me
As bad as I want you.
Chorus
Pull me close and kiss me.
Make my dreams come true.
Yes, make my dreams come true.
Verse
I know you’re shy and so am I
But it’s now or not at all.
Take advantage of the moon
And a touch of alcohol.
Pre-Chorus
Take advantage of the moonlight
Let it set the mood.
You know that you want me
As bad as I want you.
Chorus
Pull me close and kiss me.
Make my dreams come true.
Yes, make my dreams come true.
Verse
Kiss me like you mean it.
Let me know it’s no mistake.
If it’s half what I imagine.
I’ll ask you in to stay.
Pre-Chorus
Take advantage of the moonlight
Let it set the mood.
You know that you want me
As bad as I want you.
Chorus
Pull me close and kiss me.
Make my dreams come true.
Yes, make my dreams come true.
Ckiphen
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Hi,
We've never had the pleasure of meeting. I haven't been in the forum since 2016. I just began to pick up my pen again. I really like this write. It flows well and has an upbeat message to it. There was a time when I was pretty good at doing a professional level critique but it has been many moons ago. So I'll just leave it by saying that I look forward to more of your stuff. Hopefully I will get back into the flow of things again and have the privilege of checking out more of your material. Regards.
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