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If I Found Out I was Gonna Die.

My Lyrics.
Music by SUNO.

https://suno.com/song/700346df-6507-4e19-8f1c-fd5cfff4d6b8

Nice sentiment here, Martin. As a read-thru the structure seems "off", but SUNO did a good job of making it work.


Peace,

Dave

Thanks David,

I recorded this song in a studio years ago. The lyrical structure was different then and tighter.
I put it in SUNO with my meta tags and the first few iterations came back unruly.

Rather than trying to tighten the lyrics up more and force SUNO to get aligned, I followed SUNO's leads making adjustments.
Now, the lyrics appear wandering, but, several iterations later, I got something that I liked well enough.

SUNO is a moving target. I'm trying to learn it, but they are constantly enhancing it as I do.
Onward thru the fog.

Thanks for listening,

Marty

Let's hear the version You did . Robots do sound off a tad. robot addictions . must be a group for that

Ben,

You always raggin' on the robots. A lot of those robots have wheels. You live in Cali. And if you keep doggin' the robots, a bunch of 'em might
roll down to your house,
set it in own fire,
burn you up inside of it

...and blame a lightning strike, Gavin Newsome, and a DEI fire chief. Be careful where you tread.

I'll put up the original. I may work at this one a little more first.

Marty

of course your going to make it politics , you guys love that shite lol , Lets hear Marty not unrealistic robots for a penny

LOL,

It's not about me that I'm talking about or worried.
It's you and those robots.
They gonna come whoop on you for all the disrespect that you throw at 'em.

ha ha ha , disrespect robots , well kinda . talk to a session players , see what kinda respect you get for unreality robots. Cheap ass songwriters , talking more [naughty word removed] on stupid politics . Plain folks , robots and bullshit politics , like ole ladies at the parlor

Lets hear Marty , not robo rob robot

For fun, I'm working up a cover of an old Eta James song.
It's me on the electric lead and vocals.
Takes me forever to record and try to sound engineer.

Robot songs take less time than drinking a Jack & Coke.
And making a Jack & Coke is about the same complexity as knocking out a robot song.
But the robots sing infinitely better than me.

I'll put up the cover when I get it done.

Marty

There not realistic Marty , the robots. nobody can beat machines at a penny a track , its cheating. Cheap ass songwriters, Even this owner of this site. or who ever runs Robots and political site, sell outs to machines. Well robots can't wreck Motel 6 hotels, Well you guys can your guitars on walls , talk politics like ole ladies

I dunno. Have you seen videos of those robots that chase tigers and cheetahs around. I think they could wreck a Motel 6.

ha ha ha that's next wrecking hotels by robo robots. Drug addictions in LA. political fist fights by robots. Yawl are brainwashed by Suno. penny songs including Brian. Well at this point will be all out of a job pretty soon if robots get any better , Nashville will close its doors. All you tight wads will be happy lol

Hi Marty,
am I hearing things that others aren't? I think that in several places Suno is singing the words of your meta-tags. I hear the word "pause". Or is that supposed to be sung?

All the best - Robert

I think that is "because" rather than "pause."
Whatever it is, it is awkward.

I never get a SUNO back that I like, that doesnt have some little issue.
I am going to try to fix that with editing. If it doesn't fix, doesnt really matter, because it is just a song of mine buried in trillions of songs now being produced.

Try to "Replace" those sections that you don't like. In the process take the "pause" tag out. It should then sing the section properly. You can then have Suno replace it with the new, correct section.

So you going to sing one Marty ? or stay on AI ? Nashville will turn into a ghost town

Ben,

Both. I enjoy the process of recording vocals and guitars, working out virtual instruments, and sound engineering. It's fun, but it takes me months to do a song that way.

Using SUNO, I can take some old lyrics, pour a Jack&Coke, and by the time I finish the J&C, I can be pumping out versions of the song. And they will sound better than me after months of processing. Sad but true.

People are at work refining SUNO as I type. I am looking forward to the day when I can put my G/V into SUNO and it will leave it as is, and build a compliment of instruments that I choose around it. And SUNO will offer suggestions regarding my G/V. That will be a perfect fit for me. It's coming.

Marty

All right , I'll pull my horns in lol. Yeah I know , radio ready in 4 seconds. takes hours to mix a song , machines do it in 4 seconds , dis hearting for artists