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Carolina
by Barry Williams - 01/14/25 05:16 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 01/13/25 11:47 PM
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https://www.soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14844530 Song John Vaughan 2024 Vocal Mike Benitto Amost touched the moon v Walking home through summer fields of gold moonlight pointed a pathway to our door A chill filled the early morning air while the dew settled into it's favourite chair C We almost touched the moon love lifted us up into the sky. Got so drunk on love, floating up above Swear I saw the cow, fiddle and the spoon. We almost touched the moon v Like a fragile petal cradled in my hands we were one, long after a new day began In our bed lying beside me to rest one kiss then it's sleep,her head resting on my chest c b It's Sunday afternoon I fixed the coffee and the toast she wipes the sleep from a pair of deep blue eyes reaches for me from where she lies c We almost touched the moon love lifted us up into the sky. Got so drunk on love, floating up above Swear I saw the cow, fiddle and the spoon. We almost touched the moon
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Lovely song , great vocals , bit of a retro throw back to 80ties , nice song man , feel goods
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Cheers! Glad you enjoyed our song. Yes a distinctive retro feel to it.
Thanks for the listen and comment.
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Very Nice tune John.
Pleasant and light, as are the lyrics, with a very good vocal.
Nicely crafted.
Enjoyed it.
Marty
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Well, this is certainly a different musical vibe than I expected coming from you  I like the lyric and the music individually. Together, I wasn't sure at first. Like most of your lyrics, this is kind of folky and the Latin treatment took me off guard. In the end, I got into it though. Good one!
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Thanks Marty.
The lyric is one of a hundred I had on file eventually getting back to it.
The song is probably old school now but it was a style I wanted to try.
John
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Hi Gavin
Yes my much usual type of song,marrying the lyric with a Latin style seemed daunting .
I listened to some of the song stylists for some guidance, particularly Paul Anka & Engelbert.
Cheers Gavin appreciate your listen and comments
John
Last edited by Travis david; 09/23/24 01:41 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Got an email tonight from a UK publisher who accepted another song called Someone and they like this as well.
Heels have been dragged with Someone so I hope this song has a smoother passage.
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Beautiful lyrics, vocals and music. The moon has always played a role in love and it was always looking over my shoulder during many a late night kiss. Superb work here
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Nicely done there, Gavin! Good luck with this one and "Someone" too!
Peace,
Dave
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Hey Travis, any traction on this with that UK publisher?
Peace,
Dave
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