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I have no objections to Tony's rewrite, you can't copyright a title, but the hook is everything, in mine you have no song without it.

But I'm pretty sure nobody has used it. I don't write to be crazy, i write to be different.

I could have written, I'm not missing you... Think I give a shite?

Would essentially be what the song is about , but wouldn't be unique and be boring

So... What's the hold-up?
You should have had this one done yesterday...

I had my version posted and done and taken down,

Because certain people with selfish agendas were trying to deflate my ego

Where there is no ego, it's called standing up for yourself, got tired the back and forth .

Not sure your nailing the hook , but I'll give it a shot don't 't be surprised if I add to it take away from it .

I.n yours what is suicide by lightning meaning?

"It's like thunder... and lightning...
The way you love me, it's frightening..."

Quit thinking, Dom...

Lol but where does suicide come from?

how bout he wasn't looking for love, and finally got his [naughty word removed] together, don't need no complications at the moment, and in walks this woman with a lightening smile and he can't help himself, it's suicide by lightening

YES!

LOL...

Look, you keep saying that Udio responds to lyric structure...

So, why not just run it the way it is... THEN edit?

Here's your chance to show us what a master you are with Udio

Shut down the skeptics!

It responds to lyrics, that's why I'm trying to fix them. If the hook is not supported it will just go with meaning if each line, if it can discern them... suppose to be writing to the hook

And your not gonna say this is my chance...

I'm not a master of udio, and on top of it I'm using your lyrics , the lyrics were my main contribution to my stuff with udio.

Your not paying attention.and to think i was gonna start working in this....

WOW! O_o

FYI, Dom...

Your "hook" is cliché, but, I guarantee you... the computer at Udio
DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THAT.

It doesn't understand the way we do, it understands by pooling all resources together. Deductive reasoning you might call it.

Actually, if it was cliche, it would have so many others to draw from.

But it's not cliche.

I can do your lyric the way you want it, just don't pass judgement on me if ur don't sound how you expect

Lyrics matter especially when that's your main contribution.

{#I'm afraid to respond...#}

ThankYou, Dom

Ok so, I listened to 20 takes didn't like any of them.

Then i said ok let's stop fuckin around, I did you a solid and used the same verbiage in the prompts and style, I've used on some of my good stuff. then about 4 takes later this cane out

I put your verse first and lined up to have a hook in the verses too,which u think us cool

Sounds really good but before I finish which will take time, wanted o see if your happy with it.

If I do say so myself, the best, most crystal part iin this is my hook. Suicide by lightening , they slayed it lol

It's the sound of the words too if some of the words in verses , it wiujd be even better


The start
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14815794

You're right, it's not at all like what I had in mind lol...
BUT IT'S GOOD, REAL GOOD!
Finish it

You Go Boy!

Much more "energetic" than I envisioned, VERY COOL!

Soundclick is down lol, never seen that once.

But Imagine being able to use your riffs, your own soko, basically then have ai work around you instead of you working around them

Or using your melody and have them create around that

It's basically like having a great band working with yuu

I have... It'll be back soon.

Rackin' up the numbers here, Dom

I just like the singers