Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.
By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
I have no objections to Tony's rewrite, you can't copyright a title, but the hook is everything, in mine you have no song without it.
But I'm pretty sure nobody has used it. I don't write to be crazy, i write to be different.
I could have written, I'm not missing you... Think I give a shite?
Would essentially be what the song is about , but wouldn't be unique and be boring
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 07/12/24 07:43 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
So... What's the hold-up?
You should have had this one done yesterday...
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
I had my version posted and done and taken down,
Because certain people with selfish agendas were trying to deflate my ego
Where there is no ego, it's called standing up for yourself, got tired the back and forth .
Not sure your nailing the hook , but I'll give it a shot don't 't be surprised if I add to it take away from it .
I.n yours what is suicide by lightning meaning?
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 07/12/24 08:01 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
"It's like thunder... and lightning...
The way you love me, it's frightening..."
Quit thinking, Dom...
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
"It's like thunder... and lightning...
The way you love me, it's frightening..."
Quit thinking, Dom... Lol but where does suicide come from? how bout he wasn't looking for love, and finally got his [naughty word removed] together, don't need no complications at the moment, and in walks this woman with a lightening smile and he can't help himself, it's suicide by lightening
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 07/12/24 08:15 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
Look, you keep saying that Udio responds to lyric structure...
So, why not just run it the way it is... THEN edit?
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
Here's your chance to show us what a master you are with Udio  Shut down the skeptics!
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
It responds to lyrics, that's why I'm trying to fix them. If the hook is not supported it will just go with meaning if each line, if it can discern them... suppose to be writing to the hook
And your not gonna say this is my chance...
I'm not a master of udio, and on top of it I'm using your lyrics , the lyrics were my main contribution to my stuff with udio.
Your not paying attention.and to think i was gonna start working in this....
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 07/12/24 08:40 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
It responds to lyrics, that's why I'm trying to fix them. If the hook is not supported it will just go with meaning if each line, if it can discern them... suppose to be writing to the hook
And your not gonna say this is my chance...
I'm not a master of udio, and on top of it I'm using your lyrics , the lyrics were my main contribution to my stuff with udio.
Your not paying attention.and to think i was gonna start working in this.... WOW! O_o
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
FYI, Dom...
Your "hook" is cliché, but, I guarantee you... the computer at Udio
DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THAT.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
It doesn't understand the way we do, it understands by pooling all resources together. Deductive reasoning you might call it.
Actually, if it was cliche, it would have so many others to draw from.
But it's not cliche.
I can do your lyric the way you want it, just don't pass judgement on me if ur don't sound how you expect
Lyrics matter especially when that's your main contribution.
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 07/12/24 10:06 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
It doesn't understand the way we do, it understands by pooling all resources together. Deductive reasoning you might call it.
Actually, if it was cliche, it would have so many others to draw from.
But it's not cliche.
I can do your lyric the way you want it, just don't pass judgement on me if ur don't sound how you expect
Lyrics matter especially when that's your main contribution. {#I'm afraid to respond...#} ThankYou, Dom
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
Ok so, I listened to 20 takes didn't like any of them. Then i said ok let's stop fuckin around, I did you a solid and used the same verbiage in the prompts and style, I've used on some of my good stuff. then about 4 takes later this cane out I put your verse first and lined up to have a hook in the verses too,which u think us cool Sounds really good but before I finish which will take time, wanted o see if your happy with it. If I do say so myself, the best, most crystal part iin this is my hook. Suicide by lightening , they slayed it lol It's the sound of the words too if some of the words in verses , it wiujd be even better The start https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14815794
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 07/12/24 10:58 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
You're right, it's not at all like what I had in mind lol... BUT IT'S GOOD, REAL GOOD! Finish it 
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
You Go Boy!
Much more "energetic" than I envisioned, VERY COOL!
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
Soundclick is down lol, never seen that once.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100
Top 20 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 9,239 Likes: 100 |
But Imagine being able to use your riffs, your own soko, basically then have ai work around you instead of you working around them
Or using your melody and have them create around that
It's basically like having a great band working with yuu
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 07/13/24 07:20 AM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
Soundclick is down lol, never seen that once. I have... It'll be back soon. Rackin' up the numbers here, Dom
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
Top 30 Poster
|
|
Top 30 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175 |
I just like the singers
|
|
|
|
We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.
|
|
|
Forums118
Topics129,174
Posts1,186,189
Members21,480
| |
Most Online236,505
Jul 1st, 2026
|
|
|
"Do not endeavor to be the smartest kid in a dumb class. Instead, you are better off being the dumbest kid in the smartest class, where you will be challenged and you will learn. If you aren't growing, you are dying." -Brian Austin Whitney
|
|
|
|
