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RT .23
by bennash - 05/17/26 03:00 PM
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That's a good line, but followed by
If I can't say I love you, I dont wanna talk at all."
Main point is that's your only sing Shifting the goal post again Dom. Main point is that I write my own lyrics, structure my own chords and sing my own songs to the best of my ability. You do not. Machinery that you cannot even comprehend does it for you. As for your lyrics, they're fine. Better than 99 percent of what you throw at the site. But nowhere in them is anything with the finesse of "The distance in your words dropped like dead leaves in fall." You don't possess finesse. People cant be good who think that they are great...but arent.
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Eyes that peel the soul
make the moon lose control That's terrible.
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Eyes that peel the soul
make the moon lose control That's terrible. Just another errand I mean please
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You blow on your fingers as your tickle the dice
Breathe deep for a moment askin God for advice
don't know if he's with you but you aim what you say
the delicate touch might help you some way
cause, lady luck lives somewhere north of here
has an apartment between courage and fear Nothing new Nothing profound Nothing nuanced Very little finesse There was something to like about "the delicate touch might help you some way" But that's all. Kenny Rogers already wrote this decades ago.
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Eyes that peel the soul
make the moon lose control That's terrible. Just another errand I mean please "Just another errand, just another day."
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You've been squashed.
You asked for one line better and I gave you a whole book
Knock it off Beaver
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LOL
Dom,
You like your delusions.
If some random guy on a street corner enjoys thinking he is Jesus, then he's gonna think it.
If some random twist wants to consider himself a great songwriter notwithstanding no supporting evidence, Dom is gonna believe it.
you can't step back. It's not in you...here you go anyway
You are a nobody arguing with a nobody in the middle of nowhere over nothing.
That is pathetic to think about but true.
Even more pathetic to think about is that you are allowed to go on and on and no one here puts an end to it.
Oh well...
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LOL
Dom,
You like your delusions.
If some random guy on a street corner enjoys thinking he is Jesus, then he's gonna think it.
If some random twist wants to consider himself a great songwriter notwithstanding no supporting evidence, Dom is gonna believe it.
you can't step back. It's not in you...here you go anyway
You are a nobody arguing with a nobody in the middle of nowhere over nothing.
That is pathetic to think about but true.
Even more pathetic to think about is that you are allowed to go on and on and no one here puts an end to it.
Oh well... . You challenged me, and lost, it happens.
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I didnt lose sh*t.
You dug a few passable lyrics and your mental illness elevates them to Shakespeare.
They aren't.
Don't play coyin' with me.
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You wrote one line of yours that you thought was great, it was meh, but you've been here 10 years, and have one line...
but you'll still keep attacking me.
You Lost by a wide margin
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I wish I could spin a web
and capture your soul complete
you'd fall for me instantly
we'd be dancin in the street
but your beauty is kryptonite
simply not of this Earth
afraid i'm merely mortal
can't mumble my own worth Hamlet for the trailer park ensemble.
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I wish I could spin a web
and capture your soul complete
you'd fall for me instantly
we'd be dancin in the street
but your beauty is kryptonite
simply not of this Earth
afraid i'm merely mortal
can't mumble my own worth Hamlet for the trailer park ensemble. Don't you have just another errand to do? You will never admit how badly I kicked your ass just now, so you have the last word
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I know, and you know and everybody reading knows I'm superior to you.
It's obvious to everyone. To be a good lyricist you must have good knowledge of the English language. According to the dictionary, Everyone means all the people in a group or all the people in the world. One can use Everyone and Everbody interchangeably and synonymously. The word 'everyone' is used to refer to each and every person in a group. Whereas the word 'everybody' is used to refer to one and all people in a group. Like your ex-President, you do not use these words in the correct manner. I don’t agree with you. Therefore, you can’t use the term Everyone or Everybody. Correct English would be “Everyone/Everybody except Rob B.”. I honestly assume I’m not the only person here that disagrees with you, therefore this statement is total BS.
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Eyes that peel the soul
make the moon lose control Are you serious? When does the moon lose control?
Last edited by Rob B.; 06/25/24 06:08 PM.
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You will never admit how badly I kicked your ass just now, so you have the last word Of course not. I live in the real world, not Dom's make believe. But I will take the last word.... "YOUR COYING EYES WERE BOWLING BALLS" Dontchall be coyin' with my bowlin' bawls LOL
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Completely serious here...
Dom may be a Springsteen fan... but, as evidenced by his lyrics, I believe he actually listens to a lot of rap.
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You can believe Dom,
Or you can believe your COYIN' BOLLIN' BALL eyes.
LOL
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