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I could've loved you forever like the Baptist preacher said For better or worse but however You Ignored words in gospel red You”re in a Motel in Atlanta I'm home alone in Alabama ch Black dress fell on a floor Bible in a drawer Your one night stand destroyed a man Thats for damn sure Saviors hanging on a blood soaked cross For your broken commandment v2 You pretend to be the angel Do you deny dancing with the devil ? It doesn't add up you being faithful Catching you in them deceitful lies Are you suffering in damnation Hey Girl I’m counting on that Ch Bridge Should I break one myself Pull the 38 trigger You first in hell Ch Black dress fell on a floor Bible in a drawer Your last one night stand destroyed a man Thats for damn sure Saviors hanging on a blood soaked cross. For my broken commandment For her broken commandment To late for broken commandments
So I think this is a wrap , I don't like singing sad songs , But its a good angle Nashville has the work tape, So will see how turns out Where did I get the hook ? From listening to AM Catholic Radio, Which is also very sad on the world I tried for a hour on lines for a double homicide her and this guy in the hotel , But killing her is enough and would get to compilicted And its not his fault.
I was thinking about using artificial intelligence and 15 songwritters and flying to the Bahhams and write it , but the rent is due , so thats a no go How lazy can you get letting Robots write a song
But I am dating a robot and she will shop at Safeway , and I promise I won't say , You got the wrong stuff
melody is done , Waiting for Nashville tracks, Then sing it here in Oalkand Ca But the producer caught covid , He thought he infected me last time there on the 20th. Nope all good on me
Last edited by bennash; 10/20/2303:28 PM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
I'm surprised it rhymed with Tony , lonely I thought you might like that lol then we have something in common , my 2nd wife was the same. meaner then a snake All my marriges lasted 7 years 4 of them , This last ones on 8, I ALMOST find it funny
Last edited by bennash; 07/31/2309:21 AM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
Don't say the bottle is the bandit, If we say that she can't blame the whiskey , She knew what she was doing, Shes the bandit, Like that tow truck driver who stole my 2nd wife lol, she said he's more endowed then you , Stick that knife a little deeper , Lovely women if you like Satan So 2 more biblcal things in v2
Last edited by bennash; 07/31/2310:36 AM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
Sunday morning, she's a perfect angel By sundown she's dancing like the devil Straight Jack in a glass and shakin' her a$$ No shame for the joyous faithful
Sunday morning, you wer a perfect angel By sundown are you dancing like the devil Straight Jack in a glass and shakin' your a$$ No shame for the joyous faithful that might fit in v2 , better furniture
Last edited by bennash; 07/31/2312:10 PM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
lol . probably, it ain't that wordy man. Jelly Roll lyrics about the same . Thats one long bridge . 5 line chorus , 7 line verse , pres 3 lines , or a 9 line pre , shorten 2nd pre , he ends on a pre chorus, Mine has a tag of v1
[Chorus] I only talk to God when I need a favor And I only pray when I ain't got a prayer So who the hell am I, who the hell am I to expect a savior, oh If I only talk to God when I need a favor? But, God, I need a favor
[Verse 1] I know amazin' grace, but I ain't been livin' them words Swear I spend most Sundays Drunk off my ass than I have at church Hard cover King James Only been savin' dust on the nightstand And I don't know what to say By the time I fold my hands
[Chorus] I only talk to God when I need a favor And I only pray when I ain't got a prayer So who the hell am I, who the hell am I to expect a savior, oh If I only talk to God when I need a favor? But, God, I need a favor
[Post-Chorus] Amen, amen See Jelly Roll Live Get tickets as low as $20
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[Verse 2] Yeah, I owe you more than one And beggars can't be choosers But I'll pay for all I've done Just pleasе don't let me lose hеr
[Chorus] I only talk to God when I need a favor And I only pray when I ain't got a prayer So who the hell am I, who the hell am I to expect a savior, oh If I only talk to God when I need a favor? But, God, I need a favor
[Post-Chorus] Amen, amen Amen, amen
[Bridge] Hangin' in there just barely Throwin' up prayers like Hail Marys If You're still there, Lord, spare me Oh, my God, oh, my God, Hail Mary Hangin' in there just barely Throwin' up prayers like Hail Marys If You're still there, Lord, spare me Oh, my God, oh, my God, Hail Mary [Chorus] I only talk to God when I need a favor And I only pray when I ain't got a prayer So tell me, who the hell am I to expect a savior When I only talk to God if I need a favor? And, God, I need a favor
[Post-Chorus] Amen God, I need a favor Woah Amen
Last edited by bennash; 07/31/2304:04 PM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
[Verse 1] Sucker punch somebody on a sidewalk Carjack an old lady at a red light Pull a gun on the owner of a liquor store Ya think it's cool, well, act a fool if ya like Cuss out a cop, spit in his face Stomp on the flag and light it up Yeah, ya think you're tough
[Chorus] Well, try that in a small town See how far ya make it down the road 'Round here, we take care of our own You cross that line, it won't take long For you to find out, I recommend you don't Try that in a small town
[Verse 2] Got a gun that my granddad gave me They say one day they're gonna round up Well, that [naughty word removed] might fly in the city, good luck
[Chorus] Try that in a small town See how far ya make it down the road 'Round here, we take care of our own You cross that line, it won't take long For you to find out, I recommend you don't Try that in a small town See Jason Aldean Live Get tickets as low as $27
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[Bridge] Full of good ol' boys, raised up right If you're looking for a fight Try that in a small town Try that in a small town
[Chorus] Try that in a small town (See how far ya make it down the road) 'Round here, we take care of our own You cross that line, it won't take long For you to find out, I recommend you don't Try that in a small town Try that in a small town, mm-mm
[Outro] Try that in a small town , Number on hit on radio , About the same as mine , except short v2 to get to chorus quicker So kill 2 lines copy him No pre I don't think , solo chorus again no bridge, yes there is
He got heat for this song, offended bloggers or something
Last edited by bennash; 08/05/2308:36 AM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
I could've loved you forever Just like the preacher said For better or worse, but however You ignored the words in red In that cheap motel You sent my heart to Hell Ch You're a broken commandment With your dress on the floor ...(or pants for female singer ?) That bottle was no bandit You put your Bible in the drawer My heart can't forgive the abandon Your a broken commandment.. v2 Smiling like a Sunday angel Dancing with a shameless devil Nothing could have seemed stranger Than a tryst between faithful Blue eyes singing in the choir Lit your adulterous fire Ch Bridge Now I break one myself Scorn tends to murmur Jesus said hatred Is kin to murder You still use my name But marriage takes two So which of you Do I blame I'll never be the same... Ch Tag I could've loved you forever Just like the preacher said For better or worse, but however You ignored the words in red
Bridge gets a tad poectic for country , alot of good stuff in this , shorten that v2 like Aldean to get to chorus quicker . Not sure on a female singer
Did you look at the Bible in the drawer, There in the drawers in motels I think My heart can't forgive the abandon. maybe abandon might be to formal for country , I thought of that rhyme too Your a broken commandment.
That works
I could've loved you forever Just like the preacher said
Last edited by bennash; 08/02/2303:49 PM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
Lyrics Two black Cadillacs driving in a slow parade Headlights shining bright in the middle of the day One is for his wife The other for the woman who loved him at night Two black Cadillacs meeting for the first time And the preacher said he was a good man And his brother said he was a good friend But the women in the two black veils didn't bother to cry (Bye bye, bye bye) Yeah, they took turns laying a rose down Threw a handful of dirt into the deep ground He's not the only one who had a secret to hide Bye bye, bye bye, bye bye Two black Cadillacs Two black Cadillacs Two months ago, his wife called the number on his phone Turns out he'd been lying to both of them for oh so long They decided then, he'd never get away with doing this to them Two black Cadillacs waiting for the right time, right time And the preacher said he was a good man And his brother said he was a good friend But the women in the two black veils didn't bother to cry (Bye bye, bye bye) Yeah, they took turns laying a rose down Threw a handful of dirt into the deep ground He's not the only one who had a secret to hide Bye bye, bye bye, bye bye Yeah, yeah (Two black Cadillacs) It was the first and the last time they saw each other face to face They shared a crimson smile and just walked away And left the secret at the grave And the preacher said he was a good man And his brother said he was a good friend But the women in the two black veils didn't bother to cry (Bye bye, bye bye) Yeah, they took turns laying a rose down Threw a handful of dirt into the deep ground He's not the only one who had a secret to hide Bye bye, bye bye, bye bye Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
its all conversatioal lines
Scorn tends to murmur. to fancy I think , we do not talk like that
Last edited by bennash; 08/02/2303:54 PM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
I'm not a stereotypical country bumpkin lol. I hate that... I refuse to limit myself to the lowest common denominator in Nashville, always have. I'm the anti-stereotype.
I'm convinced most country folk are tired of it too, especially Southerners.
So, I try real hard not to spoon feed the audience with generic "conversational" banality. Instead, I try to paint "visual word pictures"... and I'm not afraid to be concise and descriptive. The trick is not to overpower the listener with too much specific information; The lyric then becomes unrelatable.
Prosody is also a major factor. Lyrics are written to music, so they have to share a rhythm. Carrie's lyric is written for a modern "4 on the floor" country style. Which, in my opinion, is actually rock with a southern accent lol. I could write the same song in 3/4 time, with half the words, include more detail, and still be just as intentionally vague...
So your saying my lines are stereotypical country bumpkin lol Its not bad as is I used a few of your lines, Well Carries song was a number one hit , I do study them I got her song She killed the guy with a car , and 2 women were invloved, They both met at the graveyard where they buried him and apparently got away with it. lol, So basically she's a psycho , So this other women never asked if he was married ? Right . Its her fault as much as his . It tugs at womens rights lets kill this guy , No divorce murder.. A man could never get away with this song . Double standards, Womens equality is convenient when they need it . You go to divorce court , Watch I'm the little poor girl oh shucks , Men lose all the time with that judge .
Last edited by bennash; 08/05/2312:24 AM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
Well I shot her right ? is this a fruedian slip on alcohol ? its a maybe I might break Thou shalt not kill, practice is a near rhyme broken commandment is all in one rhyme , don't think I need to worry to much on a solid set up rhyme, So Jesus is on a cross for her cheating , Seems to work. Maybe practice don't work , its a sarcastic line on how many times have you cheated on me, if that makes sense and comes across at that, Maybe cheating takes some practice , its sarcastic still, Floor hits cross on a near rhyme
Last edited by bennash; 08/03/2302:26 PM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
ha ha ha, Well men don't get a shout out much , Adulerty in %'s is usually men on doing that, That evolution thing I guess, if you wanna entangle creation and the big bang therories.
Last edited by bennash; 08/03/2302:39 PM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
Eve blamed the serpent, Adam blamed Eve, Kane killed Abel, Sampson was a complete idiot, King David had Bathsheba's husband killed, Solomon had 700 wives and 300 concubines...
Cheating hurts damn it, there's the set up solid rhyme Sampson , yup well women and all that , I'm not sure all that , the world being 4 billion years old , bible saying 6000 , Or some numbers like that Solomon had 700 wives I'm close to that , I'm sure its a personal problem , Sex is a mean addiction, Its also natural , So there's the confuison . Basically it comes down to self control. what are you supposed to think about on a pretty girl ? Politics ? not really , You can guess what most men think. from 14 years old to 90. The bible is full of fallen men over sex. Out of all the 10 , Adulerty is going to be number 1 . if you look on history and men , The failure is adultery from common men , to great men , Say like Kennedy. Here's the deal on that women are always considered the victim . Thats not true , she jumped in bed with him , so its complete bullshit. I'm not Saying RJ Kelly was not a piece of [naughty word removed] , But what were all them girls doing at his Mansion ? Expecting Sunday School lessons ? it was a free ride
Last edited by bennash; 08/04/2308:25 AM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
Same bitch , I never did cheat on her , She ran off with a tow truck driver First was the same ran off with a manager of a restaurant. My respect for women vanished after 3 divorces , Though Im happily married now , But i'm edgy , always aware they can leave in a heartbeat .
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
Ok I killed her and we both broke a commandment The twist on the end I rewrote a few lines driving 5 hours to see Walker River , When now 3 wife’s have seen .I’m sure this will be the last wife
Last edited by bennash; 08/13/2309:03 AM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
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