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Real Deal
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/07/26 01:38 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/06/26 05:36 PM
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Psychedelic Background Copyright 11/15/2014 Peggy L. Smart-Barnes
--- I 1 -----
Running down the path
where we can be
A beach line stretching past
a place to see
Do da doo
da doo
da doodle da doo
----- V 1 -------
The waves play a melody we can't resist
Laughing 'n dancing their spray passes our lips
As the moon and stars start lighting the beach
We feel the universe is within our reach
There's a connection somewhere in the night sky
Stars shooting by with their invitation to try
Reach for questions about the beauty around
Make it your own Psychedelic Background
----- C 1 ------
Doo da doo
da doo
da doodle da doo
Moving with a mood
We thought we knew, ooh
We can feel our hearts
They're beating through, ooh
Expanding in and spinning on down
It's our own Psychedelic Background
Our own
Psychedelic Background
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Is it the Colors that bring a Sunrise's fresh start
To see a Rose bloom does it open a Heart
When the Wind blows are there things we should Know
As the Rain falls do we also Grow
Springs and Rivers do they Teach us to move on
Snow Falls may chill us to Prepare when it's gone
Could it be the Songbird who Inspires this song
Why does the Night Sky give the Sense we belong
----- C 2 ------
Doo da doo
da doo
da doodle da doo
Moving with a mood
We thought we knew, ooh
We can feel our hearts
They're beating through, ooh
Expanding in and spinning on down
It's our own Psychedelic Background
Our own
Psychedelic Background
----- V 3 ------
Thoughts deepened to the order of the night sky
Precision of purpose yet we still wonder why
Reach for the questions that binds us all to
Generations connected when seeing this view
Time is persistent but the sand is now still
New stars have patterned they're talking free will
The voices are soft but the message is clear
It's part of your soul so hold these gifts very near
----- C 2 ------
Doo da doo
da doo
da doodle da doo
Moving with a mood
We thought we knew, ooh
We can feel our hearts
They're beating through, ooh
Doo da doo
da doo
da doodle da doo
We can feel our hearts
They're beating through
( Fading out)
Doo da doo
da doo
da doodle da doo
Doo da doo
da doo
da doodle da doo
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hey Peggy,i like what you have here though it sounds more like natural settings than a psychedelic one.Maybe change the name and line "Psychedelic Background" to something more in a lovers state of being.But then again,no one has the same trip!Keep on keepin' on.Mike
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I agree with Michael. The "psychedelic" idea doesn't seem to fit.
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Thanks for the read and comments Mike and Jim! The "Psychedelic Background" is kinda of a mix of the past (their background) and the fun night on the beach  Peggy
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Hi Peggy,
Nice to see you again!
I enjoyed your descriptiveness and thoughtfulness in each piece of this, but I think that more dots are needed to make this more cohesive, maybe? I'm not quite getting the psychedelic background either.
Lisa
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Hi Lisa, Thanks for the read a nice comments. Taking it all in and thinking it through Peggy
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Hi Peggy,
I like where you're goin', but I agree with the others.
It needs more to pull it all together.
Geneva
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Hi Geneva, Thanks for the read and comments.! Dang...they must have been shiitake Peggy
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LOL,yeah shiitake shrooms don't make a good trip.
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