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A test
by bennash - 05/26/26 07:18 AM
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by Rob B. - 05/25/26 11:14 PM
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Death Rides A Pale Horse
Death rides a pale horse
He's coming after me
He's out to fill his order
Nowhere that i can flee
With scythe in hand,he swings and strikes
No mercy on my body
Carves out my darkened soul
Like a demon possessed ungodly
Death rides a pale horse
With my bloody soul in hand
back to the depths of hell
Forever a dying man
The smell of death thick on the winds of hell
Oh God what have i done
Too late for mercy on me
My life of death's begun
Last edited by Michael LeBlanc; 08/16/14 07:45 PM.
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Hello Mike,
interesting lyric you have here. I'd love to see this one with one of your hand drawn music vids. This would be awesome!
David
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Hey Mike
An interesting lyric, reads more a like poem to me. I liked it though.
Cheers
Joe
Last edited by joewatt; 08/17/14 09:34 AM.
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Thanks for cheering me up Mojo lol.Good well written piece
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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thanx David,well what i see in my head i could never draw that good but thanx.Mike
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it's a poem about to be set with music Joe,thank ya man.Mike
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anytime Travis!Thanx for the read.Mike
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Mike,
that phrase feels familiar. Good image. Builds nicely.
John
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Michael, this is a frightening vision. But I understand. It is how I felt when my mother died.
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thanx for the read John.i think i need to fix the length of the 5th line on the second verse,it's throwing my metering off a bit.Mike
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thanx for your time and thoughts Jim.Sorry if i stirred up some old feelings.Mike
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I like the title and you've got some very visual lines here. Thought-provoking too with that last line: "My life of death's begun". Would like to hear how it sounds with the music!
Kristi
A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist
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hopefully i can find the music for it Kristi,thank you!Mike
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