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ok..... i whipped this one up in a slightly different style. country, but with a heavy guitar, drum beat and a lot of music. a get your feet moving song. also, i mixed the intro and chorus to make the final chorus that ties it up. don't even know if this is "legal" but it sounds fun in my head! scotty

Hell Hath No Fury

(Intro)
There�s a cold wind blowing through her heart tonight
Get out of her way cause she�s ready to fight
No little cowgirl�s gonna take her man
Cause hell hath no fury like this woman

Now she might be willing to let things slide
But push her too far she�ll saddle up her pride
She must have known it, he was acting strange
Spending all his time down at The Range

So I pulled up a stool, shes fixin to get with it
She�s throwin down cause she�s sick of this
Looks like an angel but you�ve been warned
She�s a she-cat devil when she�s been scorned

(Chorus)
And there�s a cold wind blowing through her heart tonight
Get out of her way cause she�s ready to fight
No little cowgirl�s gonna take her man
Cause hell hath no fury like this woman

(Bridge)
Now I�ve seen the best all bowed up
But he knows he was wrong when he pressed his luck
He looked so small when he promised no more
And that little cowgirl ran out the back door

(Final, Mixed Chorus)
Yeah, she looks like an angel but you�ve been warned
She�s a she-cat devil when she�s been scorned
No little cowgirl�s gonna take her man
Cause hell hath no fury like this woman

(Tag, Fade Out)
There�s a cold wind blowing through her heart tonight
Get out of her way cause sis is ready to fight

� 2004 richard scott


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ok... a friend suggested a different approach to the final chorus that goes like this....

there's a cold wind blowing through her heart tonight
get out of her way cause she's ready to fight
she looks like an angel but you've been warned
hell hath no fury like this woman scorned

then the tag.. fade out... brings the chorus full circle to the real saying. i think that might work better. any thoughts?? scotty

oppps..... p.s. i seem to remember a song i think by brooks and dunn about a lady wanting to go out but hubby wasn't real thrilled about the idea. they may have said she-cat devil in that one. does anyone remember that one and is that what they said?? thanks!! scotty

Hey Scotty!
Nice idea!
I think every chorus should be the "be warned - scorned" idea instead of "man-woman". It reads much better and seems more creative.


Cin

cin... thanks for the read.... yeah, just bouncing thoughts off the board here!!! scotty