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Real Deal
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/07/26 01:38 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/06/26 05:36 PM
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Hi there, hope you are doin fine out there? Yesterday I happened to write a new song. Words and Music came really quickly. So, I am just posting it here and see what will happen - any suggestions would be welcome. Thank you in advance  I wrote down the chords I am using for this as well, just to give you a brief idea... "Pretend/Resolutions" G G/F Em Eb D Will the turn of the year, do me any better? G G/F Em C cm Will the spirit find my soul, so next time I do better? Eb F Will all my weak spots be fading away? Bb Eb Will they be dancing, into another year? Cm D D/Bb Will I be holding on, 'til I do better? Will life treat me with care, won't life do this ever? And if I die, will I die in peace, won't I ever? Will all my memories of you fade away? Or will they stay, and make me shed some tears? Should I be holding on, 'til I do better? Eb F G7 Dancing through the year til summer is gone Eb F G G4 In the end, I surely know if I did right or If I did wrong G F C DabDabDaDadaDA I just can't pretend you are gone I just can't pretend you are gone Dancing through the times starting at New Years day And wonder if the resolutions ever gonna make me stay I just can't pretend you are gone. I just can't pretend you are gone I just can't pretend you are gone I just can't pretend you are gone......
" little christmas spirit please, I´ll take mine of the rocks"
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I have a feeling that this line
I just can't pretend you are gone
should be
I just can't forget you are gone...
which I think if I understand the lay of the story... would fit better
*****EDIT*******
And today when I look at it.... I think you are correct and I am wrong....
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Maybe if I'd drunk more last night I wouldn't be so thirsty this morning?
Last edited by Noel Downs; 02/28/14 09:30 PM.
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