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Hi, do you have music for this? The only change that I could see right now is from the line;
"Do you not care you’re hurting me?" to "Don't you care that you’re hurting me?"
"Don't you" might give it more impact. I'll admit "Don't you" is simplistic. But it can hit hard when said or sang the right way.
Good luck to you, Kris
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