Yo Mac. Excellent recording and sounds. Love your voice and guitar rhythm--cool stuff. This song to me grabs you with the melody and beat first--which I think is a good thing. Lyicists will try and understand the lyrics and there may be some ambiguity in their or your intended expressions or feelings. That's ok, as long as one is fairly consistant with their "abstract" writing in which you are. Did we ever figure out "really" what some of the Beatle's songs were saying? There are many artists that have lyrics that are shallow yet deep at the same time--just another art form thank goodness so that all of our music and lyrics don't follow the same itinerary! Super Job, love it.

steady-eddie.